In your version? Did you asked Joey for permission to edit? If
you haven't done so, please go and ask him for Permission.
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EDIT: Did you even passed grammar? :P Cos' from your
sentence:
"I dont know what to write at that time.Maybe the citaro bus will feature
electronic eds ON my version.I dont
know?"
Underlined = Error(s). Which I've corrected for you in the
sentence below
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Error
"log":
1) The ON should be IN
2) Punctuation also. You made mistakes on some of the
punctuation.
3) You used the wrong form. :P EG "Electronic EDS" you can just
simply write "Working EDS" isn't it the same?
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Correct sentence should be:
"I don't know what to write at that time. Maybe the Citaro will
feature working EDS in my version? I dont know."
He put there suitable for editing.I am just to let veyron know the
code